Writing

Recently, I browse through a Internet about TOFEL writing. I'm very insterested in those topics so I choose one to practice my writing.

Topic: Some movies are serious, designed to make the audience to think. Other movies are designed primarily to amuse and entertain. Which type of movie do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In my opinion, I prefer to watch movies designed to amuse and entertain rather than other serious movies. Living in our society where there is a fervent competition we are likely – whether you like it or not- to encounter what we call stress. It is predictable that stress will cause impacts on our lives, such as stomach ache, insomnia, and the like. Under this circumstance, we can resort to comedies from which we can release our pressure regardless of daily life, human relationship and work. In addition, as we’re engaged in working, we sometimes lead hectic lives. And we may confine our thinking styles in the environment with which we’re mainly familiar. But in fast-changing as well as competitive society, thinking ability plays one of indispensable roles for everyone in that it will direct yourself to right way in your life. As a result, via watching comedy we can expose ourselves to diversified and versatile situations, not to mention interesting. Driven and inspired by this learning surroundings, our creativity and imagination will be on the increase little by little. Last but not least, when we watch comedies, we can benefit a lot from different cultures and customs. That is, with the assistance of movies, we can easily understand that there are jokes and the prediction is sth. Now I’m going to state my reasons regarding comedy based on the following reasons.

Then I get stucked. Probably tomorrow I can make it. = =